I based this piece off of a song... Rascal Flatts - "What hurts the most"
I can take the rain on the roof of this empty house That dont bother me I can take a few tears now and then and just let them out Im not afraid to cry every once in a while Even though going on with you gone still upsets me There are days every now and again I pretend Im ok But thats not what gets me
What hurts the most Was being so close And having so much to say And watching you walk away And never knowing What could have been And not seeing that loving you Is what I was tryin to do
Its hard to deal with the pain of losing you everywhere I go But Im doin It Its hard to force that smile when I see our old friends and Im alone Still Harder Getting up, getting dressed, livin with this regret But I know if I could do it over I would trade give away all the words that I saved in my heart That I left unspoken
What hurts the most Is being so close And having so much to say And watching you walk away And never knowing What could have been And not seeing that loving you Is what I was trying to do
What hurts the most Is being so close And having so much to say And watching you walk away And never knowing What could have been And not seeing that loving you Is what I was trying to do
Not seeing that loving you Thats what I was trying to do
for some reason it looks like the girl and couch with the teddy standout alittle but good Job
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Im the monster under your bed.....I watch you sleep.....Im the duck in your boyfriends shower......I saw him naked.....Im your teddy bear.........I do things to you while you sleep....... >:3 Death Dwells in the Darkness
i dont mind... i always like when people let me know what i need to work on.. it only makes me progress... and get better... thank you.... yeah i knew there was something wrong with it but i just didnt know what...
awesome Im always afraid to just say it cuz some people get really mad and usually when i ask first they just ignore it and say something like "thanks " haha
So i was thinking that the shadow on the teddy bear is good but a little too much distance.. it almost looks like its floating i would just not gausian blur quite so much or pull it in a little closer.. and the rest of it all needs shadows.. the girl needs a very small amount under her arm on the couch and on the floor under her dress.. just a tish.. same with the stands off to the sides.. and the chair itself should have a light shadow under it.. just do a circle and gausian blur alot but not too much and lighten it up. probably like 50% opac about.. maybe not quite so much.. it just needs a little bit.. to help with shadows for me i started really paying attention to real life shadows and trying to determine how thye look even indoors.... for the little things that just need a tish of shadow try to double click on the layer or right click and click either layer styles or blending options depending on wich version of PS you have. then go click on the one that says drop shadow and just do a very small one. this will make all your shadows line up evenly.
thanks alot... i wouldnt say im new but im still learning... i always appreciate whne people tell me what i need to work on... it could only help me get better... when i first started i hated criticism i thought they just thought they were better but now its like please let me know so i can work on it... cuz i want to be better... so thank you once again... and i will work on that... as soon as i get a chance...
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Im the monster under your bed.....I watch you sleep.....Im the duck in your boyfriends shower......I saw him naked.....Im your teddy bear.........I do things to you while you sleep....... >:3 Death Dwells in the Darkness
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So i was thinking that the shadow on the teddy bear is good but a little too much distance.. it almost looks like its floating i would just not gausian blur quite so much or pull it in a little closer.. and the rest of it all needs shadows.. the girl needs a very small amount under her arm on the couch and on the floor under her dress.. just a tish.. same with the stands off to the sides.. and the chair itself should have a light shadow under it.. just do a circle and gausian blur alot but not too much and lighten it up. probably like 50% opac about.. maybe not quite so much.. it just needs a little bit.. to help with shadows for me i started really paying attention to real life shadows and trying to determine how thye look even indoors.... for the little things that just need a tish of shadow try to double click on the layer or right click and click either layer styles or blending options depending on wich version of PS you have. then go click on the one that says drop shadow and just do a very small one. this will make all your shadows line up evenly.
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